Revision

I feel what I have been struggling with most is the classroom. The classroom originally to me was all physical appearance. I am now taking a step back and thinking the effects these physical things would have on the classroom and expand more on that. I feel I need to strengthen my thesis to be more precise and let the reader know what the paper is going to be about while getting the reader intrigued.

The coloring activity helped me a lot with helping me eliminate my summary. The comments on my paper as well have helped me pinpoint obvious grammar mistakes as well as parts of my essay that can use more analysis. Our class discussion on analysis also makes me confident that I will be able to put quality analysis in my paper.

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