Monthly Archives: March 2012

Paper number two is really interesting. This assignment has made me think about many things surrounding our educational system. As I wrote my first and second draft, I thought about many ideas that could help our education system improve. Even … Continue reading →

As I was looking over my paper, I realized that I still have a far way to go. The main problem I’m having is clarifying my main central idea and organizing it to make it flow throughout the paper. I … Continue reading →

My first paper was pretty bad, I have always had trouble gathering my ideas and trying to raise an argument. Since I know it is something I have always had trouble I try to work on it and try to … Continue reading →

It really sucks how I have tests and papers due all on the same week. That really makes it hard for me to fully concentrate on one thing such as this paper. I really need to manage my time better. … Continue reading →

After reading over my essay I found that my topic was too broad. I need to take one specific aspect of my 21st century classroom and stick to it. My thesis needs some work as well. It should give a … Continue reading →

Hey everyone, I’ve been revising my draft and I started to notice that I didn’t really have a valid thesis. After looking through my points and my introduction paragraph for awhile, I started to see that I wasn’t arguing anything. … Continue reading →

I feel what I have been struggling with most is the classroom. The classroom originally to me was all physical appearance. I am now taking a step back and thinking the effects these physical things would have on the classroom … Continue reading →